Writing Prompts - Ed Griffin



I would like to welcome my guest Ed Griffin to my blog today. Ed and I are participating in the Tasha Turner Coaching -  Virtual Blog Tour.  We've been instructed to use a photo prompt to write a story. Here is Ed's creative take on it...



Holy crap. A mandala on the coffee table by the TV. My wife is at it again, the self-help nonsense and all the flowery gobbledygook those whackos come up with. Self-compassion, Grace, Gratitude. Give me a break.
Iā€™ll make up a mandala for me. Sex, Power, Money, War Movies, Beer, Baseball, Die Hard, 1, 2, & 3.
So thatā€™s where sheā€™s been the last three nights, spinning the old protractor around and coloring it all in. Very careful work. I hoped sheā€™d come to bed so we could, you know, but I fell asleep.
She knows where Iā€™d find it. By the TV. Sheā€™s off to some meeting tonight, Doctor So and So tells how to beat cancer, get to the planet Mars, and make money by drawing mandalas or some such nonsense.
I work hard, construction. Doesnā€™t she know me? I guess the other part of that question is, do I know her?
Ah, thereā€™s the doorbell. Wally. Right on time for the game. Neither of us have any kids and our wives are both into the self-help stuff big time.
ā€œCome on in, Wally. Almost game time. A brewski?ā€
ā€œHowā€™s it goin, Bernie? Sure, a beer.ā€
I went to the kitchen and Wally went to the living room. When I came in with two cold ones, he was studying the mandala. ā€œYour wife?ā€ he asked holding up the picture. Normally heā€™d be making a joke about it, but he didnā€™t this time.
ā€œYeah,ā€ I said and put the brews down and flicked on the TV.
ā€œMy wife had an interesting thing to say about this self-help stuff,ā€ he said. ā€œShe doesnā€™t draw mandalas but she uses words like this.ā€ He held up the mandala and read, ā€œIntuition, Peace, Normalcy.ā€ He put it on the coffee table and stared at the TV. The pre-game stuff was still on. I knew he had more to say on the subject. ā€œShe writes stuff like this, too. She trying to communicate with me, she says. ā€œItā€™s a language.ā€
            ā€œA language? Come on. Why not use good old English?ā€
ā€œI donā€™t know. It was her shrink who came up with that idea. ā€˜Youā€™re trying to communicate with your husband,ā€™ the shrink said.
The game started, but Wallyā€™s words were in my head. A language. What was my wife trying to tell me?

~Ed Griffin


Find Ed online at
Personal Blog http://edgriffin.net/
Writerā€™s Write Daily Blog http://writerswritedaily.wordpress.com/
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Comments

  1. Oh my gosh, Ed! We wrote about the same picture! If your wife is anything like the character I wrote about, she's about to tell you she is going to leave you! I loved your take on this. So nice to have a man's opinion on the very same thing!
    Peggy Browning

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  2. Hmmm...what is she trying to tell you??? I liked it!

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  3. Love it! I had alread reay Peggy's piece...such different perspectives...I suppose I guess men are from Mars...LOL! Great piece!

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